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These sandaled feet
have walked long strange journeys,
and may go further

'Beat' like Ginsberg now
but secrets and magic shards
still buzz in my brain

at some holy hour
in the morning, or at night...
lightning may strike thrice

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The following comments are for "Mystic Days haiku set"
by Seanspacey

Walk With a Neat Beat
we further the journey
on sandaled feet...
in search of the neatest beat

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 16, 2016 )

The Looser The Poet The Tighter The Knot
the stranger the journey
the further the walk...
the holier the hour
the wiser the clock...

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 17, 2016 )

The Bolder The Poet The Lesser The Slack
the closer the lightning
the louder the crack...
the longer the whip
the sharper the whack...

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 22, 2016 )

May All Your Rythms Rhyme
we seek the beat
of a higher calling...
the music between the ears

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 23, 2016 )

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