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papaya whip clouds
we
are fashioned
by
living hands
that
determine
who
we are
after
the
gray storm


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The following comments are for "After the Gray Storm"
by FireFly747

Resting Fate
the fate of clouds is gray...
resting in the hands of sunshine...

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 17, 2016 )

A Bright Request
the gray storm
evaporates into the blue...
at the behest of sunshine

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 7, 2016 )





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