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Crystal Seems
Blue eyes that Dream
Full of Sparkle

Seeking Answers
Seeking Truth
Carefully Turning
Every Stone

For this women
Is so alone
In a World
Not Fit For Angles

Butterfly’s
Shall be her wings
Soon will find
The one who Sings

The Song of God
Destroyer of
Magog and Gog
Deceiving All Nations

Melchizedek
Shall be Her
Elation


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poetricky


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The following comments are for "One who Sings"
by Zeus

Perfect Little Angels
angels are fitted
for this unfit world
otherwise...
we'd all be perfect

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 31, 2016 )





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