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Please give me poetry...

that floats

swimming freely

not belly-up

� G.Dean Stevens

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The following comments are for "Throw Me a Life-Saving Poem "
by awhippingflame

Excellent Write!
This is a wonderfully penned write. I find that we, as poets, are always trying to be successful and find success through our writing. I truly enjoyed reading this. Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. :-)

*S* Cynthia

( Posted by: KindHearted [Member] On: June 2, 2016 )

Thank You for Your Kindhearted Words
This is my home
outside of my head...
it is in your words that I live

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 3, 2016 )

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