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She said
That she
Loved me
To death
So then
She smiled
As she...
Shot me!

------
Ronald Peter Ciras


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The following comments are for "Misplaced Dreams"
by moroccanron

A Bullet for My Love
I'd rather be shot by Love...
than to bury it

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 27, 2016 )





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