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Hermes slips over
the green morning hills to light
the stirring valley

Men forsake blankets
and soft arms to grind coffee:
the day's race is sprung...

in back, blue roses
gather their sun-scented robes
and shake off night's dew

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The following comments are for "Blue Roses haiku set"
by seanspacey

Morning Blending
I spring-a-ling-a-ling
for soft cuddly arms in the morning...
the coffee can go grind it's self...!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 4, 2016 )

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