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You showed me true light
of Gods love within
I was trapped in Darkness
That shadowed the Light
Need to move the clouds
That stops the light from shining


------
poetricky


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The following comments are for "True Light"
by Zeus

Once Upon A Render
We render the clouds
that shun the light...
and live in day as night

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: April 23, 2016 )

day as night
You cant have light without the Dark....

( Posted by: Zeus [Member] On: May 2, 2016 )





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