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I hope this poem is not to short or to long
If you like it I will write you a song,

Many miles across the sea
A women lives the one for me ?
How can we tell will this be True
Your eyes of blue will I sink like a ship
As I hold you close hip against hip

Hand in Hand goose bumps I freeze
Maybe fall upon my knees
Shaking like a leaf on a tree in the wind of night
The thought of you only brings light

Bright and full of our hearts desire
Will this spark a never ending fire ?
One of love that lifts us higher

Not even feeling our feet on the ground
As we speak with our eyes without a sound
Will I drown in your arms holding my breath ?
Maybe our love will see no death ?

Who knows what the future may hold
Till we meet I feel so cold
Though your words of warmth
Are worth more than gold
You give me hope that soon I will see
Love is real not a fantasy…


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The following comments are for "goose bumps I freeze"
by Zeus

A Fiery Desire
The Heart's capacity
for desire...
is measured in fire

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: April 29, 2016 )

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