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Recharge, Restart.
Time to begin anew.
So set the Clock and
with my racing shoes on
I'm going to Win this one.

Let us leave the Past
right where it is
and move forward
into the rising Sun.

Like a Phoenix,
from the flames of Creation,
I am born again!

~ Brandan Michael.

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The following comments are for "Phoenix Rising"
by fbomber125

This Is How the Phoenix Rises
The flames of Creation
set your ass on fire...
not to run faster
but to run higher

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: April 23, 2016 )

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