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Her heart was broken
Because I was yet to
Return her call.
After a hot night of passion,
She didn't realize that
She forgot to give me
Her phone number.
Deep in thought,
She sought to reach me
Through friends and
From rumors that she heard.

I was the rope who helped
Her cross the river of life
With my steady hands,

When I held her close,
No one else was near.

She was bursting of love for me
With a love that was mystic and
Gentle and a little out of control.
Together, our lives were wider than the oceans,
So healthy and free.
Me loving her,
She loving me,
Forming a shining star
For the whole world to see.

------
Ronald Peter Ciras


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The following comments are for "Broken hearted"
by moroccanron

A Love Shiner
Love shines
from afar...
to each and every star

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: April 30, 2016 )





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