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God of calamity
the alcohol no longer sways the whole,death
death in my heart
trader,deceiver,liar
i hate you...as much as i,i Love
you are not you...not any more
i don't know you,your virus... behavior
you hateful creature,demon
i'm walking away...today
you've no power over my heart,soul,or being
you've killed me as far as your concerned
i phenix from here
as i stand brushing off the ash of the past
open my eyes to the new morning's sun
i feel warmth and full
filled with ,bless
I'm blessed as are you




------
ray yorba


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The following comments are for "cat"
by mrray

The Calamity of It All
Calamity...
is a blessing...
when you leave the past in ash

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: April 26, 2016 )





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