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Polluted air, dead man's wonder.
Taken back from the blunder.
Sing a broken song to me.
Pinstriped suit said, "TURN THE KEY".

Television said, ozone with haze.
Eye's feeling blurry,a walking maze.
Plastic pyramid, a French song.
Pinstriped suit said, "THEY'RE WRONG".

Egg shell air covers the earth.
Open the curtain on a blue birth.
Garage door closed, suicide ways.
Pinstriped suit said, "MANY DAYS".




from my poetry book DREAMS 1

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SCRATCHES ON THE PAGE,
MAKING NOISE


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