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JUMP WHERE ? there is no air.
C O 2 all walking in pairs.
Trees are burning to the ground.
Some or most don't think it's profound.
If the acid rain don't get you.
Loss of oxygen will do.
Carbon Monoxide like a silent ghost.
At your funeral the grand host.
YET, we must breathe every day.
Can't deduct it from our pay.
It's really there like a gift.
Can't part it and try to sift.
Put a very funny mask on.
PIG NOSE FACE - to hide beauty gone.
It just won't ever stop.
Life on earth became a flop.
What will tomorrow bring ?
ALL DEAD - and not a thing.




from my poem book DREAMS 2


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SCRATCHES ON THE PAGE,
MAKING NOISE


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