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Comes in a pill.
Have your fill.
All waters foul.
Acid rain with owls.
Can't ever have a drink.
My skin just turned pink.
Brain matter dull gray.
Melting like ice every day.
Don't feel very well.
Really just like - HOT HELL.
Empty glass before me.
Rusty water-rent and key.
T.V. said, "ALL IS WELL".
REALLY JUST LIKE - HOT HELL.
Soda, beer-Have your fill.
Doctor said,"Your getting ill".
Can't get off this earth.
Poison water - Another dead birth.
Won't live very long.
WATER WATER-sing that song.

from my poetry book DREAMS 2

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SCRATCHES ON THE PAGE,
MAKING NOISE


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