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"He to whom a form is not a flower is a barbarian." - Confucius

'Cold brains are unmoved'
new, unglued... 'a Zombie feast,'
'a cut-throat delight'

'you won't but you might'
snakes gone crazy- madness lights
the wayward freaks home....

in a reptile dance..
'you wear a mask' as in Rome...
one last Pilate lance

'I see them rise and
fall into the jaws of love'
the Anubis kiss

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by Seanspacey

Killing Me Chilly
There's nothing colder
than the kiss of Death...
other than a chilling hug

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: April 26, 2016 )

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