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Sometimes...

You read or hear something
so...
so...
so 'right',
and,
your whole chakra column
comes to attention
as if on command.

Sometimes... a big AMEN!.....
just wells up inside you
And it originates
in your very core,
the every center of your being.

Sometimes.....
You read something so
given to a synchronous flow
and it make ya wanna go

Sometimes...
well, sometimes,
you see...
that flower
and..... uh
well, you just wanna pluck it

and, uh

Sometimes the words,
they come so softly
they land so lightly

Well, sometimes they're just
easier on the ears
even...
ears-i-er on the ease

1. ears = plural of ear
2. i = adverbial suffix,
converting the plural noun
to suggest something can be
described as being '... like ears'
3. er = a suffix describing
increase of the earsi
to which it is attached.

Sometimes,
She just needs
to take a rest
between her breasts
between his breaths
they breathe their best
and sometimes...
we pass the test

And sometimes,
you end up saying, "YES!"


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