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Let me have that
priapic torch to fumble
my way
through this dampness
this itching

What is this mound
of redolent
grass that shimmer
in the gloaming
eager

Ah!

Commence
the glorified rhapsody
to rapture
unbound by
woebegone wasps

Engage!

I look up above
the horizon lies
the streak of random visions
but with purpose
sound, true

Disengage!

Apply the treacle
to the anxious sore
blithe
uninhibited to stretch
abating backward in slumber.



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The following comments are for "Quietus Simplex"
by penumbra

Wonderful
Alas..For I believe you have done and excellent job here. I gave you a 10.
Your wording is exquiste. I look foward to reading more of your work in the future.:)

( Posted by: Lovesessence [Member] On: July 20, 2003 )





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