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I don't even know exactly where to begin
when you're born past God's original sin
Your mother telling you that you weren't meant to be
if she had only the bus fare and all the money
that ever lasting impression
to be the epitome of depression

So you walk through life knowing you're a mistake
and you have the will to live but there's a point break
the smile you show the world is just a fake
and you push the limits to see how much you can take

it doesn't matter all the love you might ever feel
will never be enough for you, nothing can be real
they tell you its only you for them to survive
the next day they are fine, still perfectly alive
so when all is said and all that is done
when you fight to win who really fucking won?
You can look into a mirror and see what has past
but only the memories of the love will ever last
no matter how hard you try to become the ideal
no one will ever know who you are and what you feel
so live out this day and give up on thinking it's regret
this will all be a lesson not a second you will forget.
Let it be and let it take over who you thought you are
because in this life, there can only be one shining star.


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