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I can't let go,
Of the hurt, laced, in those lies.
Lies that slid from your lips,
And splatterd on the floor before me.
I love you,
Knowing I am defeated,
I love you,
Knowing you can't.

I see you all the time,
Acting like you did no wrong.
The sudden detachment,
Leaving me breathless.
I love you,
Despite my anger,
I love you,
knowing you still love her.

The pain,rises my hate,
Wishing I never met you,
cursing my ignorance.
I see this mess before me,
And slit your throat to match it.
I hate you,
For making me feel speacial,
I hate you,
For taking it all away,
I Love you,
Forbidden fruit that rotted.



~Bleed~


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The following comments are for "Forbidden Fruit"
by Bleed

Coolio
Cool I liked yet I hate you. lol Joking.
He loves her no matter what her faults may be which is nice. Everyone has faults and we see people everyday put up with more than we think we could handle. Good Job.

( Posted by: lovesessence [Member] On: July 22, 2003 )





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