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Another Year
Another Tear
Another Strain

Pushing Back
The untold Pain
Mental block

Ticking clock
Hoping soon
It all will stop

This bloody mess
The world today
Count your blessings

Thatís all they do
They cry to god
Oh why my lord

If only they could see
Through the creators eyes
Look in the mirror
At all their lies

Then one may say
Itís no mystery
Just a story

They cannot see...

------
poetricky


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