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As moonlight froths into our room
I felt besieged, puny against the intransigent swell
It blossoms forth and distends itself until it becomes engorged
A maniacal maw equipped with hunger for rooms such as this
Yet- I wait in the stillness. Unoccupied.
Desperately catching smells of you longgone.



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The following comments are for "Still"
by Shakti

The Niceties of Life
You convey an exuberance here...
that is almost carnal...
and very nicely put...!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: October 16, 2015 )





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