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One for the city.
RAT without pity.
PIZZA SLICE for me.
Down steps free.
People walk around.
WHAT IS THAT FROWN.
I am hungry and free.
PIZZA SLICE no fee.
I am a rat in life.
GOD, knows my strife.

This is a true story of a rat in
NEW YORK seen carrying a slice down steps.


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SCRATCHES ON THE PAGE,
MAKING NOISE


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The following comments are for "PIZZA RAT"
by poewhit

Life-Long Parmesan
How fraught for the city rat...?
Eating pizza...?
Cheese first...?

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: November 8, 2015 )





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