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I guess this,
like black,
beautifully plain.

Against the canvass,
running swiftly,
for the last dot.

hurdling pages
twisting knots
rolling scrolls

exhale...
heart-tuned
mechanical thump

melodic jitters,
characters
falling in line.

rising, peak
climax,
fall.

infinite varations
one end

all narration
closes with a bow.

------
~piggy~

When you write... just write.


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The following comments are for "Black on Canvass"
by piggyjc

When Black is All There Is
When all variations
lead to black...
you cannot get your colors back

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: September 26, 2015 )





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