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When I look
Into her eyes,
I see her world,
Awash, in a sea,
Of deep blue.

And when I
Kiss her on
The lips,
And I touch her,
With my fingertips,
I feel so fresh
And brand new.

I guess that is

What love can do.

Ronald Peter Ciras

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by moroccanron

If Not for the Heave Ho of Hearts
We push ourselves
to the brink of Love...
our Hearts get us up and over

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 23, 2015 )

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