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did you think it would last?
a love so pure was never meant
never meant to be held long
before fading into the past

a blur of colors
fill my heart
soon I'll explode
in a flash of love
I'll go BOOM
and never look back

did you think it would last?
did you really think it would last?

~ Brandan Michael.

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by fbomber125

Love...and the Big Bang
There's nothing like the big bang
to make the heart go Boom Boom

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 15, 2015 )

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