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soil under me
will soon bury me
and all I am

death always follows
try to escape fate
you'll never get away

it's the same old song
it's the same old face
and place and space

back in pain
one more step
and I'll fade away

don't expect me
to make it far
no I'll never get away

away from my grave
when the world slips away
I'll be one with God

------
~ Brandan Michael.


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The following comments are for "one with God"
by fbomber125

Prepared to Jump
It is our essence
that defies the dirt...
jumping the unworthy grave

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 23, 2015 )

I find...
that mortality is hard to accept

( Posted by: fbomber125 [Member] On: December 15, 2015 )

Know Faith
I have no faith
in mortality...
that would be the death of me

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: December 16, 2015 )





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