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straight lines are
boring necessary but
boring efficient but
boring black and white is good for
chess and
moon pies.

fucking moon pies.

summer is black full thick.
winter is white obvious trite.

Spring is silver,
his edges slippery and shy.
Autumn is fallen brown.
She holds the liquid center,
gracious in sleep,
dreams words,
drools a little,
and settles, slowly,
into promise.


I blog irregularly at TinkerX. I'm also on Twitter. @andyhavens, go figure.

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The following comments are for "Pencil Sketch"
by andyhavens

Life Is Measured in Pencil Nubs
No self portrait
was ever drawn
from a life not penciled in

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 23, 2015 )

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