The following comments are for "XIII" by TrueGenius
title and category
A very cat-e-gory poem! . . . groan.
Sorry. I know. :-}
But the reason I bring it up is to point out that Lit.org does have a specific Haiku category for poetry like this. (it doesn't really make much difference, I suppose, but it helps to know what to expect, and it makes it more likely to be found by someone searching the site for Haikus)
I'm not really a Haiku fan myself, though it is growing on me. This one is just plain weird (and I mean that in a good way). A masochistic mouse and a puzzled cat... how odd. :-D
While I'm here, I'm also going to ask about the title. I notice you're giving most of your poems roman numerals instead of titles? Hmm... Not something I really go for. As with the category, a good title can draw the reader into your work before they've read a single line, but I'm really not sure that XIII has the same effect. Okay; shoot me down in flames, but I like a title. :-)