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tears flood my eyes
hard to see
hard to breathe

so I take this knife
and cut myself
not too deep
and not too wide
just enough to feel alive

my heart aches and breaks
each and every day
when the sunrises
I realize I'm still alive
and when the sunsets
I pray that I won't
wake the following day

well back and forth I go
running to and fro
trying to break the cycle
trying to stop the tide
to end the flow of time

and the moon shines bright
but this fog of darkness
stops me from seeing
the beauty in it's light
and slowly I start to waste away
to fade away, I'm fading away...

~ Brandan Michael.

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