That sums this up for me. I like the idea, and it's a nice little thoughtful poem, but you're pushing the boundaries of shortness. You don't say enough in your words to justify such a short poem - or at least, you dont use enough impact. If you had, this would have been fine.
Posted by: False Dawn [Member] On: July 20, 2003
say this say that
well i say congrats to you if that Haiko statment is in fact factual
Posted by: rincewind [Member] On: June 8, 2004
On the Order of Self-Alignment
in perfect order...
you are not who you think you are