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I have now become
One of those people I thought
I could never be

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by TrueGenius

Too short
That sums this up for me. I like the idea, and it's a nice little thoughtful poem, but you're pushing the boundaries of shortness. You don't say enough in your words to justify such a short poem - or at least, you dont use enough impact. If you had, this would have been fine.

( Posted by: False Dawn [Member] On: July 20, 2003 )

say this say that
well i say congrats to you if that Haiko statment is in fact factual

( Posted by: rincewind [Member] On: June 8, 2004 )

On the Order of Self-Alignment
Align yourself
in perfect order...
you are not who you think you are

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 5, 2016 )

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