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Just a gathering of foes
drifting through days
wandering through our lives.
Before they look insside
seeing nothing but self loathing
spit their disgust at you.

Refusing to come to grips
with themselves
turn to those
they see
as where their problems originate.
A game of loathing.

bhagwandave 2015

Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game

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The following comments are for "Sending 5he wrong note"
by bhagwandave

A Heart the Size of a Gizzard
Do not treat your Heart...
as a gizmo for loathing...
Isn't that what the gizzard's for...?

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 11, 2015 )

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