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Rain falls upon me
Walking along the puddles
Rainbows within sight

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The following comments are for "Rain falls upon me"
by louiemary

Don't Make a Pond Out of a Puddle
Beyond Life's puddles...
find rainbows...
and potholes full of gold

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 29, 2015 )

Thank you for that!

( Posted by: louiemary [Member] On: May 29, 2015 )

capturing earth
A snapshot. In the moment. Full release. Enjoyed.

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: May 29, 2015 )

i like haiku
and i really like your haiku.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: May 31, 2015 )

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