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Which kind and how much
can you stand?
Me not much of either

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The following comments are for "Heat"
by chapter1

Can I Get a....Huh?
The how much of which...
I can hardly stand...
is tolerated to the extent...
I'm not shivering

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 29, 2015 )

Not sure I get this.

Of course, that doesn't mean much as most things go right over my head.

I am curious, though--"which kind", what are you referring to? Various levels of heat? A gradual swell? The inevitability of total fire?

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: May 29, 2015 )

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