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I want to write a poem about 'nothing'
(not an easy thing to do) .
I want to describe the emptiness
that I've found since I lost you.
The crashing waves of ecstasy
will me missing from my verse.
There will no expletive adjectives
or headless-chicken curse.
The glorification of life's scenery
will be omitted from this page.
I will not mention the 'seven wonders'
or some ancient, historic age.

I will simpy be negative
and just scribble what comes out.
Leave you hopelessly pondering...

what this poem is all about


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The following comments are for "A Poem about Nothing"
by ograd77

A Happy Heart is a No-Brainer
Empty your head...
and see how fast your Heart fills

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 23, 2015 )

material
I can feel what you're trying to achieve here. I get it. It's a great start. Keep pushing. You've stumbled on to something great.

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: May 29, 2015 )





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