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Our country is sick and we are in trouble, we need someone to make us well
A person of caring and compassion , a man that just wants to do the right thing
Does any one else think we are living in hell?
The man, not a politician, but some one doing what they feel in their is right, something that will make our hearts sing

All our country needs is another politician that makes decisions made by politics
We are one nation, united under God, where everyone is equal and the same
A man led by God, and with God's help, this country he will fix
A man of compassion, caring so much he became a doctor, a man that would not play political games.

Gosh, just look around, our economy so fragile, people want to kill us for just being who we are
Standing by our allies, protecting them, being our friends, not just standing watching from the shadows
A man that would be involved, not watching from afar
This is our country, our forefathers, they had a hard road to hoe.

A man that just wants to do the right thing for us, an America that those that came before us saw
The constitution, our road map, what are government was supposed to be
This person to do what is right for us and there will be no flaws
A doctor, most are perfectionists, as people's lives are in his hands, from his view perfection from this he would never flee.

America, one time our country was so great, wealthy and always within reach the American dream
But one has to ask the question " What happened here?"
Our allies don't trust us, our enemies no longer fear us, we need someone to change this pitiful scheme
We need a rock, steadfast and standing up for what we believe in making this very clear.

This man is here now, not corrupted by politic, but compassionate understanding soul
Someone to do what is required, a president that will not turn and run
A man serving our needs, protecting us, this is the main goal
The man for our president for 2016 Dr. Ben Carson.

Lanaia Lee


The following comments are for "Of Compassion"
by abbey74

The Misappropriation of Compassion
When spent
on the rich...
they call it an appropriation

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 10, 2015 )

Of Compassion
how true!

( Posted by: abbey74 [Member] On: June 15, 2015 )

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