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You said your love was true
And you promised me the world
I remember all the days and nights
We spent in that little world of ours
You said wed never part
You made me love you so
And then you took all your love away
And you gave it all to someone new

You meant the world to me
And I guess you always will
I remember your every kiss you know
And every time you touched me deep inside
Each time I loved you more
You made me love you so
And then you took all your love away
And you gave it all to someone new

Now all I do is cry
And wonder went wrong
I play our story over in my head
And Im still no closer than before
Loving you is all I know
You made me love you so
And then you took all your love away
And you gave it all to someone new

Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
Guess love can be so blind
And sometimes so unkind
You made me love you so
And then you took all your love away
And you gave it all to someone new



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The following comments are for "LOVE YOU SO"
by MTMarshall

Love Lowers the Force Field
Love is a force...
Not to be forced...
And you certainly can't give it away


( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 17, 2015 )

Love you so
Love is a state of being one gives to another...

( Posted by: MTMarshall [Member] On: May 27, 2015 )

Love Is My Best Offer
We offer Love...
that's the best we can do...
the rest is up to you...

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 27, 2015 )

Still waters
sorry don't agree OPeriod... It is a state of being as all emotions are ... this is not a debate ...

( Posted by: MTMarshall [Member] On: June 1, 2015 )





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