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Did you know it was all for nothing?
...the sweat
....the tears
.....the blood
....and scars
and the seemingly endless nightmares,
all for nothing??

I've got nothing to show for
all the miles I've run
...and...
all the hurdles I've jumped

I always came in last place
there was no trophy for me

...no ...no ...no
it was all for nothing

and as the darkness takes me
I close my tired eyes...

------
~ Brandan Michael.


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The following comments are for "All for Nothing"
by fbomber125

as the darkness takes me
But you do have your poetry. That's something.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: May 16, 2015 )

In Search of a Trophy Life
Life...
is not about receiving trophies...
but rather...
giving them away

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 17, 2015 )

yep
my poetry...
yea I got that

( Posted by: fbomber125 [Member] On: July 8, 2015 )





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