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Looking back...
I see blood on the glass
I see snakes in the grass

Looking back...
I remember the darkest of nights
over the brightest of days

...and rays of hope fall short
as I look backwards

~ Brandan Michael.

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The following comments are for "Looking Back"
by fbomber125

A Well-Lit Back Side
Turn not your back...
to the Source of Light...
Else live all your days as night

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 15, 2015 )

blood on the glass
I live by Bowie's Law:

Don't look back in anger.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: May 16, 2015 )

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