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She can be calm as
a midsummer's day, or as
destructive as a
tornado and anywhere in
between that is her nature.

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The following comments are for "Windy"
by chapter1

I'd like to think that I reside in her in-between.

I really enjoyed reading this so early in the day. It's brought over me a sense of calm to know where I stand. Sounds silly, I know, but, it's true.

Very few poems on here move me the way yours did today. I'm anxious to read some of your previous submissions.

Thank you for sharing.

( Posted by: Pablowilliams [Member] On: May 10, 2015 )

Windy Wets Her Lips to Blow
I miss Windy...
on those hot days...
I'm tired of cold showers

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 10, 2015 )

anywhere in between
If you ever publish a book of poetry - or another, if that's the case - make sure you pair this up with a picture. Perhaps an aftermath image.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: May 16, 2015 )

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