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we quaffed the night rabid
like soul-searching demons
lusting after words
while our members
raze echoes against
cowardly applause
as we aim to bridge
mankindís repetitive steps
in a world of narcissistic
whoring our souls
into believing that
we can guide our own steps
and regard the internet
as God

"Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead." ó Charles Bukowski

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The following comments are for "Through the crowds and wiring"
by pablowilliams

God Rules the Data
The Internet...
Inspired by God...!
Surely Al Gore didn't invent it...!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 3, 2015 )

Whoring our souls
This can also work for poetry sites.

Loved it.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: May 3, 2015 )

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