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NEVER

In the morning,
When we wake up,
We will await
The new world together.

And, when I look
Into her eyes,
All my hate
And troubles
Will escape me.

And when I
Hold her close,
Embrace and kiss her,
I have a feeling that
Our love will
Last forever.

So, if, you were
To ask me if I
Would ever leave her
I would tell you:
"Never!"

Never! Never! Never!

------
Ronald Peter Ciras


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The following comments are for "Never "
by moroccanron

The Art of Hate
Hate...
is an escape...
The hater...
an escape artist

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: April 25, 2015 )

Never say never (by Romeooid)
"So if..." does not need commas.

Ah, romantic gestures...how they make us want more.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: May 3, 2015 )

Correction
That was supposed to read

by RomeoVoid.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: May 3, 2015 )

Plugging the Romantic Void
When passion spreads...
and opens up...
it is Romeo who fills the void

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 4, 2015 )

Correction
That should read:

'it is Romeo who plugs the void'

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 4, 2015 )





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