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The Cup of Life
the Holy Grail

Rusty Nail
Plank of wood
was just a tree

No one died for you
No one died for me

save yourself
Give Jesus some dignity

open your mind you may see
Where does it say
A man died for your sins

Other than words
from pedophilic priest

The Evil Beast
That lives with in

Synagoguesí with False Idols
the artist impression

of heaven and hell
just a brush stroke

turned gods intention
into a joke

for many will see
Things in reverse
those who say

Just pray all's ok
Jesus will save you
Sunday wash the weeks
sins away

Monday the evil begins
they think like sheep
after all follows are asleep

they pray Many a man
Decorated with glory
all taken from a book
Not a bad story

when you twist curb
Change the word
Control power
Stand so Tall

Join the High Priest
we will have a ball
The Alter Boy
will take it all

in silence he will sit
as we arch his back
Iím finished now
your turn brethren jack

donít worry

the bishop will give no flack
we all have blind eyes
And dam bloody good
at telling many lies

The holy grail
in silence slipped away

its all in your head
Depends which way you sway

------
poetricky


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The following comments are for "The Cup of Life"
by Zeus

The Miracle of Art
I am just a brush stroke...
at the hands of the Greatest Painter

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: April 6, 2015 )

God's intention
No offense but while reading your poem I kept trying to make it fit Ricky Martin's song of the same title.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: April 28, 2015 )





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