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Life is the Ruins

Pain is the teacher

Loneliness the sentence

Death is my Master.......


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poetricky


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The following comments are for "Death Master"
by Zeus

Loneliness the sentence
Ooh, I like this. Reads like an intro to a novel.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: April 30, 2015 )

Life is a Messy Business
If I didn't have...
my life to ruin...
my shed would be a mess...!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 6, 2015 )

Thank you
Thank you for your comments Regards Troy

( Posted by: Zeus [Member] On: September 29, 2017 )





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