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I want to wrap you in
A black mink cover if
To be a real fur hater then
Let faux fox be the
Swoon gentle
Cost


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The following comments are for "Wrap you"
by michaelpatrick

faux fox
Your poetry reminds me of someone who used to post here years ago: Patrick Burns. Forgot his username here though.

Anyway, I like your wordplay.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: May 3, 2015 )

Your Passion's Worth
The high price for swooning...
is but a pittance to Passion

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 6, 2015 )





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