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you're so loose
with the noose
and no one knows
how loose
is the noose
before darkness falls
a chair alone
lying on the floor
feet twitching above
so the noose
is never too loose

~ Brandan Michael.

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by fbomber125

The Mighty Tidy Knot
While life is a fray of loose strings
Some choose the tidy knot

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: March 13, 2015 )

knots won
i lost someone to knots before

( Posted by: fbomber125 [Member] On: March 31, 2015 )

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