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I'll take a chocolate one from Dairy
Queen over yours Mother
Nature any day sorry.

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The following comments are for "Blizzard"
by chapter1

snow i-scream
here you have a great set up, but collapse lacking a verb, past or present, to emphasize drama or pun.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: March 2, 2015 )

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