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She cast a
A shadow
Of peripheral
Mystery over
His trusting
Eyes slowly
Blinding with
Poisonous lies
Yet over a
Wandering sundial
The cardinal
Serpentine is
Ever seeing

Leaving tomorrows ox
Trotting furrows
Under crying skies
Hide red swollen
Eyes trust no fur
Uncle with peaceful
Surrender because
With steely tears
In the dead of night
It steals them

Aunt May has a
Aura again seeing
Black in full bloom
The light gives
Her pain like daggers
In old tired sieves
And she has no heed
To fair warning coupling
When it's over it flies
Out of the red

And lands on a
Crematory roof top
Licking and laughing
Loves inflicting them
With stillborn promises
No pity goes tick
Mock she bled a fourth
Issue under lock
And key and misused
Empty as I can say

But to the demon
That dwell
Torment is

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