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I had a dream about
Tim a meadow
A funny wild flower
He grew live
On Saturday
Night

I saw Audrey
Another great
Meadow from
Somewhere in
Asia on the
Shore

Though they
Both reach the
Blue sky funny
They are as a
Different
Breed

As buttercups
And daisies
I had a crush
On her during
A honeymoon red
Flush does her
Cheeks get out
Of a empty bed
Room

And I was with
Glee son
Swoon



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