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The soft evening
Is in miseries
Addictive company
While a ravens winged
Memory is
Broken

A life time of sickness
Quick high fixes
For coming crucifixes
She stands bewildered
Beside herself and
Lies but not in a black
Beneficiary

And lowered in cruel
Populace ground in
A old poplin dress
With sewn on faded
Lace and a clown makeup
Face

Litter with tumble weeds
For tulips and roses
No cairn memories For
Even a stick cross
Just deaths unkindly
Pretty principle





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