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To weather or
Not to wither
With a heart
That's black
As it is painted
Grey

This dice of death
Slithers across a
Cruelly felt breath
And thy eyes say
Come blindly my cold
Manly man and suffer
My fool

Nail and void is
The normality
For this recent
Sex cell deformity
Defray with little
Humility

Wear rubber defeat
Like so many other
Hearts gone delete
The definite answer
Vacate





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